I have to confess, i don't know who the charector is, but I like the composition. Nice wrinkles on the shirt-thing. The arms are a little unweildy. They're rather thin (and so is he) for the shoulders. As well, I don't think you can hold a sword like that without jabbing yourself through the head, so just some things to think about. ^^
Yay, thanks for the detailed Crit ^_^ I really need those
Yeah, the arms look a bit akward to me, I tried to fix them but they ended up looking even more weirder O_o and he DOES look somewhat streached
thanks again for the comment ^^
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reall really beautiful work .. the hair look so great .. and i like the fonts that you used ^^
keep it up.