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Comment on Christmas - by ~xcarebearx

~alllightisgone:iconalllightisgone: Aug 14, 2002, 4:10:49 PM
I like your prose, it's very moody and very realistic. It makes you wonder if this could easily happen to you, or someone on your street... very unnerving. Great job, nice writing, thumbs up :-) (Smile)

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~black-r0se:iconblack-r0se: Aug 13, 2002, 9:28:49 PM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! ITS GREAT! oh thats definately goin in the favs =D (Big Grin)

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`aeternitas:iconaeternitas: Aug 13, 2002, 10:52:08 PM
Damn.. =/

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~drippingblood:icondrippingblood: Aug 14, 2002, 8:53:27 AM
FRECKING AWESOME fav
~gravityoverdose:icongravityoverdose: Aug 14, 2002, 1:05:27 PM
The change of theme is rather disturbing.

Plus you never REALLY described how they died. Suicide? Murder? *shrug*

Good story anyway, ruined my morning ;) (Wink)

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~kiwianimeangel:iconkiwianimeangel: Aug 14, 2002, 1:05:33 PM
Very nice, it touches people. It reminds me of my past christmas experiences!
~alllightisgone:iconalllightisgone: Aug 14, 2002, 4:10:49 PM
I like your prose, it's very moody and very realistic. It makes you wonder if this could easily happen to you, or someone on your street... very unnerving. Great job, nice writing, thumbs up :-) (Smile)
~torn-pages:icontorn-pages: Aug 14, 2002, 4:11:42 PM
It's very disturbing and vivid. I adore it.
~morningstar:iconmorningstar: Aug 19, 2002, 9:07:35 PM
wow... demented, disturbing and sick... so of course i like it...

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