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~AngolSakura515:iconAngolSakura515: Aug 27, 2007, 8:02:55 PM
I like it though--it has much better flow and a better rhyme and reason, for not thinking about it. You should not think about writing more often. Big brother--if you still are my big bro--this was great!

She'll see it here? Is that good or bad?

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~AngolSakura515:iconAngolSakura515: Aug 27, 2007, 7:54:31 PM
That's...so full of emotion. It is beautiful.

Scattered and un-professional looking? I think not.

Well done.
~gartoss:icongartoss: Aug 27, 2007, 7:57:35 PM
Thanks. Unlike the usual, I pretty much wrote anything that came out then worried about rhyme and reason. After all, it's just my thoughts on the situation, and since I couldn't actually get her voice mail, she'll see it here eventually.

--
"Love can never be portrayed the same way as a tree,
or the sea, or any other mystery.
It's the eyes with which we see.
It's the sinner and the saint.
It's the light inside the paint."

--Tom Tom, Million Dollar Hotel
~AngolSakura515:iconAngolSakura515: Aug 27, 2007, 8:02:55 PM
I like it though--it has much better flow and a better rhyme and reason, for not thinking about it. You should not think about writing more often. Big brother--if you still are my big bro--this was great!

She'll see it here? Is that good or bad?
~gartoss:icongartoss: Aug 27, 2007, 8:26:40 PM
I still am. And it's good that she'll see it here. If she doesn't, maybe she'll see somewhere else I posted it.

--
"Love can never be portrayed the same way as a tree,
or the sea, or any other mystery.
It's the eyes with which we see.
It's the sinner and the saint.
It's the light inside the paint."

--Tom Tom, Million Dollar Hotel
~Astor-Sigma:iconAstor-Sigma: Aug 28, 2007, 12:05:40 AM
Very nice. Reminds me of that country song...heh.

--
"I don't understand, but it's not a problem."
--Sousuke Sagura
~AngolSakura515:iconAngolSakura515: Aug 28, 2007, 6:16:14 AM
You still are. Makes me happy. Ah, okay. Well then, I hope she sees it. It's a great poem anyway.
~luv-u-2-death:iconluv-u-2-death: Aug 28, 2007, 9:03:47 AM
T_T It's gorgeous Bronson. Even if it is scattered it's awe inspiring.

--
American Evil
Hellister
Abercrombie & Fag

You catch my meaning?

*emo, punk, goth, grunge, scene, etc. ALL THE WAY*
~gartoss:icongartoss: Aug 28, 2007, 9:30:36 AM
Oh, shit, you mean Austin? I didn't even think of that! XD It made me think of Cake - Never There. XD

--
"Love can never be portrayed the same way as a tree,
or the sea, or any other mystery.
It's the eyes with which we see.
It's the sinner and the saint.
It's the light inside the paint."

--Tom Tom, Million Dollar Hotel
~gartoss:icongartoss: Aug 28, 2007, 9:31:16 AM
Thank you! And thanks for the Favourite!

--
"Love can never be portrayed the same way as a tree,
or the sea, or any other mystery.
It's the eyes with which we see.
It's the sinner and the saint.
It's the light inside the paint."

--Tom Tom, Million Dollar Hotel
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