Comment on The Third Sibling by SilverInkblot

No, I don't think it ended too abruptly. I thought that you did a great job conveying all that information with such little words. That is also a very powerful topic you chose, and the wordplay you use gives it all the more of that punch. I do think you could've spaced the lines a little bit more, and used complete sentences for each stanza instead of stopping the stanza mid sentence, but that's just me. Other than that, I though it was a great poem. Keep up the good work.