Flora-Lynn's avatar
Why isn't this adorable~ I can't critiq this because I'm not a core XD

But hey! I got some comments about this!
-The coloring is super awesome, keep it up!
-Grillby's neck is too small >°< Try to expand it a little at the upper part
-The rest are awesome, but ty to improve more shading on Gaster's coat! But I think it's okay

I like the picture and the ship >◇<
KATEtheDeath1's avatar
I see what you mean, this is actually my first time drawing Grillby, he was difficult to draw, and used a lot of refs to draw him.
As for Gaster, I keep changing his design every time I draw him so I haven't decided what my version of him would be.
Anyway, thanks so much for the comments ;w;
I'll try better next time :D
Flora-Lynn's avatar
OMG UR WELCOME!

Like, don't bother or being too hard. It took like a month for me to draw a fire right XD Just, try to improve the necks. The rest are cool~
KATEtheDeath1's avatar
Thanks! I'll keep practicing :D
Flora-Lynn's avatar
You are weeelcome!