If you ask me, all it needed was SOMETHING at the end. Perhaps for that screen to shake, the water splatters off, the end. Just to fade it out seems... I dunno. Pretty cool, but not exactly my cup of tea, as the British say.
And yes, I realize it's a photo, but I hit "play" before I read the comments, so I just reiterated what I was thinking during it, then I saw it was a RL uploaded picture.