In the fic, is Ganon king or something? I don't think Zelda would ever cover her face like that unless she is either in mourning (if her father died) or Ganon's king and he's being a creep. She's also showing a bit of cleavage, (and hip) and it just doesn't fit with the proud, modestly dressed Zelda I've always seen. If she does marry Link, I can't imagine he would make her cover her face like that.

Please forgive me if I have give the impression that your pic is badly drawn or anything. It looks wonderful! I especially like your use of shading plays of light over the material. Being a LofZelda fan for most of my life, I'm just awfully curious about the storyline behind this piece.

Anyways, best of luck to you!