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May 4, 2004, 10:03:19 PM
May 4, 2004, 10:03:19 PM
nice work, I love thae logic that comes you put in this. It flows well, one suggestion though. . . it seems to degress in time as the poem goes through, but stanza 4 (Tell me about your father) seems out of order. It might improve the poem more if you switched s. 4 w/ s. 3 (Read me a bed time story.).
Excellent job, highlights what parents think is important vs what is going to happen, how life will be. . . Time. . . very nice job.
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Excellent job, highlights what parents think is important vs what is going to happen, how life will be. . . Time. . . very nice job.
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Tastes like crap. . . . ya want some?
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Good work hun!
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Excellent job, highlights what parents think is important vs what is going to happen, how life will be. . . Time. . . very nice job.
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