Cute, although I'm not a fan of the pairing. *hides*
Although, you could put the authors notes, such as explaining the setting, their ages, and relationships in an author's note before you begin the story, so that the reader's attention won't be broken by interruptions. Also, Deidara's cuteness made me giggle.
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Of Insanity And Inspiration, a Deidara doujinshi: [link]
"Science without religion is lame. Religion without science is blind." -Einstein
AWESOME!!! I think you're starting to get better than me. oh well, I loved it!! ^_^
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