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~JRMLPhotography Nov 26, 2007, 3:35:52 AM
its really beautiful but the lighting keeps tricking my eyes a bit...the light is on the wrong side of the model i think...if the light was on the front of her it would hit the front of the building behind her not infront of her. i dunno im not realy critisizing your work just trying to give my artistic eye...isn't that what art is for?

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~reflekshun Nov 26, 2007, 1:18:11 AM
Very nice expression, comes across very nicely! :)

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~DISENT Nov 26, 2007, 2:42:49 AM
nice work dude, one of your best I've seen for sure.

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~JRMLPhotography Nov 26, 2007, 3:35:52 AM
its really beautiful but the lighting keeps tricking my eyes a bit...the light is on the wrong side of the model i think...if the light was on the front of her it would hit the front of the building behind her not infront of her. i dunno im not realy critisizing your work just trying to give my artistic eye...isn't that what art is for?

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~meihua-stock Nov 26, 2007, 7:52:07 AM
wow really nice work, very well put together.. but the lighting is weird, it's really strong on the right side of the archway, and it's somewhat soft and shining on the right side of the girl... that makes no sense. if it's harsh on the right side of the archway it should be shining strongly on the left side of the girl too. and then of course I wonder where it comes from, since the background seems to be in the darkness of night.

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Mood: Love ~infinite-kemo Nov 26, 2007, 3:33:31 PM
Thanks for your comments and suggestions, they are exactly why i did this.

The whole arch and balcony needs to be flipped, so the light is comming from the same direction that it hits her skirt.

Thanks again for your comments, i will adjust this image accordingly today if i get some time

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Mood: Neutral ~infinite-kemo Nov 26, 2007, 10:38:08 PM
I changed it around a bit (didnt have much time). Re adjusted the balcony, put more contrast on her, played with the shadow and also put a SLIGHT colour layer over the top to tie it together..

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Mood: Love ~infinite-kemo Nov 27, 2007, 3:19:54 PM
hanks for your comments and suggestions

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~infinite-kemo Nov 27, 2007, 3:20:07 PM
thanks for your comments and suggestions

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~brind0g Nov 27, 2007, 10:58:18 PM
hey bruz, loving the work man.. i personally think u have done a great job on the shadow!! looks very convincing!! Keep at it mate!! :D
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