Comment on Airborn by *silla-chan[parent]

Hey that's very nice, I like how you did shades on feathers on head and wings. Great! <3

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Sorry for my english

aww what a nice birdie! it's good to have you back silla

lang tid men, m,en æ har jo venta så læng allrede >.<

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Thank you Valita!
It's cool to hear that you like it!

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BIRDIE! It's good to be back, Imb!

Jobber med saken! må prøv å få jort færdi no tægninga æ har jobba me læng no!

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You really have patience to work on your illustrations, uh? ^_^
The tin feathers looks so softs. Like blowing on the wind.

Loved it, lovey!

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I only used 3 hours on this one. And yeah. I sat with my nose 1 mm from the paper for the 3 last hours of school. But I finished it! *proud* It's a new personal record!
*stares at beak* OH, I love the beak! It's so cute!
I will be working more on wings! They NEED improvement.

And thanks for the comment, angel! X3 You're the best! =3 If you got more advice about what to do different to improve I'll gladly listen! =3

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and and! Got anything to say about how I can improve, imb?

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Valita?
SOrry for asking, buuuut.. Do you got any constructive critique for me?

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Sure, I can try! XD
Well... *thinks really hard* if you're drawing feathers, you don't have to do them all the same - go ahead and experiment! Birds usually have fathers at the end of wing longers than other. I don't know how to say it, but I hope you can undearstand. XD
Hmhmhmhm. Head is really good, I can't see anything bad here.
Mm, tail. It looks... *searching da right word* ow, I hope this one is right: stiff/stiffy? XD You can always make it bigger, more... wide. I hope it's right word too. XD
I think anatomy is all right, even if somethings messed up I can't see it.
And your shading is very good, theres no any special advice, you must just practise and it'll be better and better.
I think that's all. I hope you can understand what I wanted to say. I really like this picture! I can always give some constructive critism, some people just don't like it and I prefer to be more careful.

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Sorry for my english

I just have to say thank you! Constructive criticism is good sometimes!
I didn't try to hard on the wings and tail, but you helped me to change the errors into words!

Hopefully, I'll get it right soon.
Thanks again! ^_^

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