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Comment on Mumashii Toki by *BigJimmyC

*Hermetic-Wings:iconHermetic-Wings: Dec 1, 2007, 4:23:07 PM
Your deviations are allways try the hardest way!...Baddogltd is an important deviant and I folow him loyally!..But belive me, even he will say that was a good composition...

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~mittensforthekittens:iconmittensforthekittens: Dec 1, 2007, 2:24:45 PM
i havent seen a piece like this before but really this is great work i agree with you about the angle but its really not bad. great work!

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~Danelese:iconDanelese: Dec 1, 2007, 3:05:40 PM
i agree that this isn't as good as it could be, but it is the beginnings of a good idea. i think perhaps that the idea is a bit too pop to go with his dark style. it's not easy to mix the two. I would seriously consider re doing the photo to give it more dimension. that would bring out a better contrast between the two styles.

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*Hermetic-Wings:iconHermetic-Wings: Dec 1, 2007, 4:23:07 PM
Your deviations are allways try the hardest way!...Baddogltd is an important deviant and I folow him loyally!..But belive me, even he will say that was a good composition...

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"la vita nova" is the new chance to me given by hermetic wings...and now hermetic sources is on...
*BigJimmyC:iconBigJimmyC: Dec 1, 2007, 4:25:36 PM
Definantly. There are mores ways to make more appealing and pop, as well as give it my own little flare. I love how you leave some of the best comments!

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*BigJimmyC:iconBigJimmyC: Dec 1, 2007, 4:28:20 PM
Thank you captain! I think there are a few peices with clock headed people around. I think it would have been more original for me to give the guy a dildo for a head instead, hahaha.

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*BigJimmyC:iconBigJimmyC: Dec 1, 2007, 4:32:11 PM
Thank you! I wish I tried a bit harder on this though but it didn't come out bad. I'm definantly thinking of retaking it!

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~mittensforthekittens:iconmittensforthekittens: Dec 1, 2007, 5:57:47 PM
nuh uh there are millions of dickheads walking around all ready.

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*Hermetic-Wings:iconHermetic-Wings: Dec 1, 2007, 6:08:16 PM
Up to you my friend but I think it is good enogh...But you are the artist :)

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~VonDerV:iconVonDerV: Dec 1, 2007, 6:41:40 PM
I feel so proud of being your pre-critique :p

I love it! I love it! I love it! :clap:

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~Danelese:iconDanelese: Dec 2, 2007, 12:32:52 AM
i do what i can. besides, i know you're looking for a real critique.

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