It's somewhat out of proportion.
The boy with dark hair's head is a little flat. Try looking at your face in the mirror and see what I mean.
You should add shading to it so the drawing doesn't look so flat and the folds in the blankets wouldn't look like little squiggles.
Well your drawings are ALL out of proportion. The neck is too thick, the mouth is where the nose should be, the drawings are exaggerated, they are overly fat, you're copying real anime,the face is flat and ugly , and it's very wannabe-ish. You also can't shade, and your drawings end up looking like a 3 year old's. You also can't spell.
The boy with dark hair's head is a little flat. Try looking at your face in the mirror and see what I mean.
You should add shading to it so the drawing doesn't look so flat and the folds in the blankets wouldn't look like little squiggles.
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