Comment on Original Character 2 by *HatakeKelley

whoa...that is one cool lady. Love the look on her face.

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I'm 25 with 5 kids. I often look like this --->

And I love every minute of it! XD

Thanks!

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Akatsuki at Arby's

Welcome!

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I'm 25 with 5 kids. I often look like this --->

And I love every minute of it! XD

Wow, really good! ^-^

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I think it turned out pretty good. I do like the character designs.

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Thank you!

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Akatsuki at Arby's

I saw her and her twin, I think they're cool! They have really neat silvery outfits and they're abilities are interesting. =3

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Thanks!

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Akatsuki at Arby's

Cool...
I guess the explanation makes me understand the arm... *ouch* The ouch goes for my brain too, because of the many high level English words... *to lazy to open a dictionairy now*
I like the uniforms (I guess that is what they are, because her sister is wearing it too ). But, you should be careful with the opening, since it is not in the middle. It can really make it look off, even when it isn't. I had that feeling a bit with [link] near her legs.

And, conserning this picture... Her knees seem to be a bit too low...

Please, do make up a name for her soon! Characters need names!! Especially pretty ones with a story

And also, publishing your idea here on DA has an advantage, you know. An idea is offically yours, when it has been made public by an action. Now it stand here on DA, written, by you. It is now your idea and you have (c) on it and have a good chance to defend it should someone steal the idea. I don't know if American law works the same way... But well, a small expression of an idea is enough for it to be know to the world and therefore you hold the rights
*hits head for to much Law rant*

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Don't lose sight of living
On trembling nights, I still my voice and drown in the pain
Please forgive my broken breaths...
~Taion~

I like the idea of a highly flexible stretchy charachter taht has limits within a natural means. Great job on originality with the twins. Would love to see themin action! Keep up the great work!

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