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Comment on Mein Bett by *HulioJules [top] [parent]

:iconhuliojules:
Yep. A few. At the moment, in my gallery, there are two: "Necessities and Peril" and "The Fragile - Disenchanted"
and, especially for you (cause it is also fixed rhyme)
I'll submit a :new: one that is a bit... funny :) "Will I ever see this moment?"

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It is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors! Oscar Wilde.

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:iconsinginchic7:
Looks awesome just wish i could understand German...

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You can close your eyes from the things you don’t want to see but you can never close your heart from the things you don't want to feel:heart:
:iconhuliojules:
Thx :) It's about the cosyness and comfort warmth and protection of a bed, with the realization that it's not the bed itself, but rather having a person to share it with, wich makes it feel like that

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It is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors! Oscar Wilde.
:iconsinginchic7:
That's cool do you have any fixed poems that are written in English??

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You can close your eyes from the things you don’t want to see but you can never close your heart from the things you don't want to feel:heart:
:iconhuliojules:
Yep. A few. At the moment, in my gallery, there are two: "Necessities and Peril" and "The Fragile - Disenchanted"
and, especially for you (cause it is also fixed rhyme)
I'll submit a :new: one that is a bit... funny :) "Will I ever see this moment?"

--
It is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors! Oscar Wilde.
:iconsinginchic7:
Yay cool cuz I like the english ones but i don't like ones without rhyme schemes as much!

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You can close your eyes from the things you don’t want to see but you can never close your heart from the things you don't want to feel:heart:
:iconpetswithoutheads:
mh, das fühlt sich schön an, guter schluss! :)

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Das ist nicht die Sonne die untergeht, sondern die Erde, die sich dreht.
-Tomte
:iconhuliojules:
Vielen Dank! Mit nem ähnlichen Gedicht mit nem ähnlichen Wende-Schluss [link] hab ich grad n platz bei ner Ausschreibung gemacht, inkl. VÖ, für die erste Einsendung irgendwo gar nich mal so unbegeisternd... :w00t:

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It is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors! Oscar Wilde.
:iconpetswithoutheads:
herzlichen glückwunsch! das gedicht is auch wirklich gut :)

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Das ist nicht die Sonne die untergeht, sondern die Erde, die sich dreht.
-Tomte
:iconhuliojules:
BTW I recently wrote an english version of "Mein Bett", it's even rhyming quite well... [link]

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It is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors! Oscar Wilde.

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