yes nicely written, glad that ur writing got a comment from euphoria, I haven't seem to get her to comment on mine... but maybe thats cause I suck really bad, and my next poem is the last i will probably post on da... so anyways im venting.... nicely written good luck in the contest.. take care
oh...my...god. this is the best erotic poem i think i've read...well, ever, i suppose. and it conveys so much emotion (like all of your poems, in fact).
well, you finally got a comment from me, its been awhile, but our talking about it earlier made me realize how much I missed DA. I must say, this is pretty sweet, and I love how you say so much without using a lot of words. I maintain that the trick to erotica is subtlty and strong emotion, and you have both here. And I don't think its really TMI (maybe if you were writing about something that had actually happend I'd be a little more weirded out). I can really sense the building passion... beautiful.
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This is marvelous! Love how it builds.....the excitment~ gawd! -I am so bad at commenting on poetry! Suffice to say that I REALLY enjoyed this
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good luck in the contest!
(did you mean for the line to say "silent fury to my limbs"?....just wanted to point that out)
I have always enjoyed the way you use line spacing in your poems to accentuate them, and build to a climactic point
yes, good luck in the contest...
damn you for doing this to me and damn you for writing it so well.
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good luck in the contest!!!
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well, you finally got a comment from me, its been awhile, but our talking about it earlier made me realize how much I missed DA. I must say, this is pretty sweet, and I love how you say so much without using a lot of words. I maintain that the trick to erotica is subtlty and strong emotion, and you have both here. And I don't think its really TMI (maybe if you were writing about something that had actually happend I'd be a little more weirded out). I can really sense the building passion... beautiful.
-Paladin
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