I think you could totally rock out a comic style. Especially if you tightened up your lines and colors. It would look even more awesome than it already does :3 I really wish you'd do more!
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im digging the whole thing entirely. very nice.
colors are working splendidly. i just want to see them tightened up a bit
the only that really strikes me is that you break the 180 camera rule. in three panels narcissa is looking from right to left, and kreacher from left to right. then in the third panel, you break that and switch it. thats the only thing i would call wrong, cause if done badly, it completely throws off the viewer. here, its not so bad, but you should watch out for it.
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the unfinished ones are still better than the scribbly comic I did where I reduced the dialog to net speak... XD
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colors are working splendidly. i just want to see them tightened up a bit
the only that really strikes me is that you break the 180 camera rule. in three panels narcissa is looking from right to left, and kreacher from left to right. then in the third panel, you break that and switch it. thats the only thing i would call wrong, cause if done badly, it completely throws off the viewer. here, its not so bad, but you should watch out for it.
finish the other pages! and do more comics!
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