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oh-my-god. GIVE ME MORE WOMAN!!!!!!!! i should get like a preview or something im drawing your characters!!!!!!
ahh. why,WHY!>!?! !/ why do you tease me so!
BRAIN KILLER. wh-what if its hannah?! -GASP- IT IS?! ISN'T IT.
EVIL FREAK TARD. NO! JOKING. i just want more. that was insanily awesome babe. -_- but now my head hurts. i think im over thinking this. WHY?! i have no idea. my hands twitching though, want to draw more! thank you inspiration.
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ahh. why,WHY!>!?! !/ why do you tease me so!
BRAIN KILLER. wh-what if its hannah?! -GASP- IT IS?! ISN'T IT.
EVIL FREAK TARD. NO! JOKING. i just want more. that was insanily awesome babe. -_- but now my head hurts. i think im over thinking this. WHY?! i have no idea. my hands twitching though, want to draw more! thank you inspiration.
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Reading your reaction was hilarious. It officially cheered me up. :3
I haven't started on the second chapter yet. I probably will in Wasemann's class or something. That is, if I don't suffocate from ferret stench.
And for the brain killer part...
that's for me to know and you to figure out.
I'm starting to wonder when I should start putting mature content on some of my stories once they get really violent. I mean, I'm not going to describe it to the point where someone may throw up their computer, but death will be a common thing throughout this story. x_x
I haven't started on the second chapter yet. I probably will in Wasemann's class or something. That is, if I don't suffocate from ferret stench.
And for the brain killer part...
that's for me to know and you to figure out.
I'm starting to wonder when I should start putting mature content on some of my stories once they get really violent. I mean, I'm not going to describe it to the point where someone may throw up their computer, but death will be a common thing throughout this story. x_x
AHAHAHAHAH-HA! death! ha! i love that word, so fun. ^_^
i love how we just sling around the idea of wasmanns class being like nap time.
he's like welcome to class
and all of us are like GOODNIGHT!
lol. tis amazing. HEY! if they throw up its there problem, s'not like your cleaning it up. ne?
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i love how we just sling around the idea of wasmanns class being like nap time.
he's like welcome to class
and all of us are like GOODNIGHT!
lol. tis amazing. HEY! if they throw up its there problem, s'not like your cleaning it up. ne?
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Not hannah wow I was freakin out in the middle of it.. Why demetri y YYYY???!!! Aww Poor cassie ..DOes she make or will it be another innocent to the handsoumly cute vamps/
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My moral compass doesn't exactly point due north, but when I say something's wrong, something's wrong.
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My moral compass doesn't exactly point due north, but when I say something's wrong, something's wrong.*lol* Oh, it has vampires. ^ ^ At first I was like, "Hm, murder mystery?" Mainly because I didn't even read the genre. ^ ^;;
Anyway, this is really good. Most of the time your descriptions were just enough to let me be imaginative in my mind, but sometimes I felt like they were a little lacking.
Great job. ^ ^
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~Ed Gardner
Anyway, this is really good. Most of the time your descriptions were just enough to let me be imaginative in my mind, but sometimes I felt like they were a little lacking.
Great job. ^ ^
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i'm having an eye-gasm
I NEED MORE
I NEED MORE
Thanks. <3
As far as the descriptions go, I like to drag them out over chapters. I feel like if the information on a character or place is described in great detail in one paragraph, it won't stay implanted in the mind. Usually my characters are only completely explained by the end of the book.
There's more to it, but it's hard to explain...
As far as the descriptions go, I like to drag them out over chapters. I feel like if the information on a character or place is described in great detail in one paragraph, it won't stay implanted in the mind. Usually my characters are only completely explained by the end of the book.
There's more to it, but it's hard to explain...
You're welcome. ^ ^
Ah, if you put it like that, your philosophy on descriptions sounds good. I like the idea of mystery in the characters that you think you know.
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Join my undead army.
"Opera is when a guy gets stabbed in the back and, instead of bleeding, he sings."
~Ed Gardner
Ah, if you put it like that, your philosophy on descriptions sounds good. I like the idea of mystery in the characters that you think you know.
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"Opera is when a guy gets stabbed in the back and, instead of bleeding, he sings."
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VERY long, here is a couple of tips, i cant list them all.
the first line, you can expand vocabualry just alittle bit, instead of she had woken up screaming for three nights in a row, you should put
She awoken screaming for three nights in a row.
of course you dont even have to do this, its just a suggestion.
thats all.
the first line, you can expand vocabualry just alittle bit, instead of she had woken up screaming for three nights in a row, you should put
She awoken screaming for three nights in a row.
of course you dont even have to do this, its just a suggestion.
thats all.
OMG! this is so freaking cool!! was that her friend!!??
You got me at the edge of my seat all the time!!
Cant wait to read the other chapters!
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-you do me harm
-too bad my dear, deal with it! what does not kill you makes you stronger
-do you want to kill me?
-no, i want to make you stronger
You got me at the edge of my seat all the time!!
Cant wait to read the other chapters!
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-you do me harm
-too bad my dear, deal with it! what does not kill you makes you stronger
-do you want to kill me?
-no, i want to make you stronger
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As far as the descriptions go, I like to drag them out over chapters. I feel like if the information on a character or place is described in great detail in one paragraph, it won't stay implanted in the mind. Usually my characters are only completely explained by the end of the book.
There's more to it, but it's hard to explain...