Comment on Destined by $y2jenn

The characters are dynamic and detailed enough that they keep the eyes focusing on one at a time. The blackwork blends in with the girls hair which is a bit distracting at first, and it does provides separation for the characters. Each character appropriately depicts one of four presented elements and without color with still has continuity as a whole piece of art.

Suggestions: Pull the backdrop back with a middle ground tone, add sheen to the girls hair to draw it away from the other blackwork. And keep it up I love your artwork style!

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looks great wheres taka

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They all look so awesome and fierce, but I think Katara looks the best. It's just so dynamic!

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Bold inks! I love it, I know you really pushed your way out of your comfort zone on this one and I'm extremely proud of you for it. Looks damn cool!

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"The characters are dynamic and detailed enough that they keep the eyes focusing on one at a time"


I was thinking the same thing.

ZUKOFACE! *hones in and SQUISHES*

It looks gorgeous - very beautiful inkwork! I love Katara's hair.

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Above and beyond Jenn. Above and beyond.

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I LOVE IT! the feel of the whole pic is amazing!!! i cant wait to see it colored!
and lol poor sokka the nonbender! heheheh

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Very spectacular. Four elements....as one.

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