The character really reminds me of The Bouncer, and I'm not sure why.
When I focus on the back of the character's head I feel as if he's looking at the space between the monster's left leg and arm, rather than making eye contact.
Very cool design on the Giant's armor and I love that extreme angle on the perspective you did with it. You also did a great job with the atmospheric perspective and the color pallet is really to my liking. The composition is great I like the the poses more or less, they follow the Golden Triangle
I think that you could stand to push those high lights a little stronger in the areas where the sunlight is most direct. The pose of the hero looks just a tad stiff to me and the foreshortening of his left arm looks off to me because it doesn't seems to be coinciding with the foreshortening with his left leg, I think they would be similarly proportioned wouldn't you?
By the way how do you get it to ask when you want a "Advanced Critique Encouraged" I can't seem to find options for it.
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The monster and the armor are fantastic! I do have to agree with King-Rastel about the arm. Something about the foreshortening just isn't doing it for me. Everything is otherwise fantabulous though!
Nicely done, I like the design of the monster and the hero-character. Tha perspective is also done rather well. I'm going to have to agree with the other guy though, the left arm looks a bit off, but overall, it looks great!
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Indifference:It takes 43 muscles to frown and 17 to smile, but it doesn't take any to just sit there with a dumb look on your face
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Brazilian Blood, Irish Soul.
When I focus on the back of the character's head I feel as if he's looking at the space between the monster's left leg and arm, rather than making eye contact.
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God likes you.
I think that you could stand to push those high lights a little stronger in the areas where the sunlight is most direct. The pose of the hero looks just a tad stiff to me and the foreshortening of his left arm looks off to me because it doesn't seems to be coinciding with the foreshortening with his left leg, I think they would be similarly proportioned wouldn't you?
By the way how do you get it to ask when you want a "Advanced Critique Encouraged" I can't seem to find options for it.
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Feel free to check out my gallery
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If you like what you see why not watch me? I am constantly pumping the artwork out so there will be plenty to see.
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Mhm.
only it was smaller and there were a bajillion of them
and i had a laser sword
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