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~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 8:57:36 PM
I should of mentioned, but forgot... this is a rough draft... hehe going to go with it. Some friends and I are working on it... mostly, I'm the writer... hehe...

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Let the Moon see your soul and live the life of the night.

My German, Spanish, Japanese, French, And Italian maybe a little rusty.

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~snowfyre:iconsnowfyre: Feb 5, 2008, 5:38:32 AM
Pretty interesting, nicely spaced into bite-sized chunks, though bit lost from reading it.


Oh and "to be continued" or "to be concluded"

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"There's a reason why the word 'Supposed' was invented"

--> Snowfyre
~Snapjaw:iconSnapjaw: Feb 5, 2008, 5:43:08 AM
yay writing loving it so far!

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Don't try to run,
Don't try to hide,
Either way it's suicide.
Surrender yourself to her jaws,
Let your flesh rip beneath her claws,
For she is the wolf,
Snapjaw...
~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 5:45:37 AM
pt 1= part one... hehe ^.^ pt 2 I'm working on right now...

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Let the Moon see your soul and live the life of the night.

My German, Spanish, Japanese, French, And Italian maybe a little rusty.
~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 5:45:49 AM
Thank you mate...

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Let the Moon see your soul and live the life of the night.

My German, Spanish, Japanese, French, And Italian maybe a little rusty.
~horriblescreenname:iconhorriblescreenname: Feb 5, 2008, 2:26:41 PM
Fun, how long do you plan on making it?

It was really good, there were a few errors I noticed like
Ok bucko, just hurry with it.” Said an older man.
needs a " at the begining too, but nothing distracted or took away from the reading.
*Chobaryu:iconChobaryu: Feb 5, 2008, 5:14:06 PM
Very nice :3 This has some interesting potential. I'd like to see where it goes :nod:

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"Though we live in trying times, we're the ones who have to try." - 'Everyday Glory'
~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 8:57:36 PM
I should of mentioned, but forgot... this is a rough draft... hehe going to go with it. Some friends and I are working on it... mostly, I'm the writer... hehe...

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Let the Moon see your soul and live the life of the night.

My German, Spanish, Japanese, French, And Italian maybe a little rusty.
~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 8:57:46 PM
Thank you mate...

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Let the Moon see your soul and live the life of the night.

My German, Spanish, Japanese, French, And Italian maybe a little rusty.
~horriblescreenname:iconhorriblescreenname: Feb 6, 2008, 5:37:11 AM
Awsome. I can never get any of my friends to collaborate a project for anything (except every once in awhile I can get a bunch of them to be in a movie, but none of them do any editting), so I'm sure thats got to be a lot of fun.