Comment on Innocent Love by ~yannay[top] [parent]

manga-ka club? sounds interesting

aww sweet picture. and yes, very belated chinese new year pic! XD

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Aww, this is so sweet! ^___^

It's really good, especially since I think it's quite difficult to make the backs of people look nice. xD

-loves the background, especially the sky!-

I just have 3 things to say:

1. Are the ribbons meant to be tied randomly to the pigtails, not over the hair ties?

2. Nice shading, but I still think you should blur it here and there to make it look softer!

3. You should use a darker blue, perhaps less saturated, otherwise it doesn't really look like shadows any more. xD

4. (Because I can't count) If I wanted to be really picky, I'd mention that you'd probably want to have the vertical piece of wood going from light to dark, since the overhanging piece would probably block out a lot of light. ^^

And yay, that is it!

But now you make me want to draw again...

But I always overcomplicate things so I can't just draw quick 3 hour pieces unless they're extended chibis... @____@;;; -flails-

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Obsessed with Final Fantasy. Beware! // Is very busy at uni/college so will probably not be around much... @___@;;;

@____@ now Kei is giving contructive crit. all the time. Thanks! You didn't use questions, wow. Yeah...the ribbons are sloppy-ly tied. I tried cell shading coz I was running out of time! lol (went to see Jumper tonight) and ah, I forgot about the wood. :______; <--- (now I'm using YOUR emoticon thingys)

I thought about what you said before when I did this picture. You notice, this is the exact same style as the one I used for illustrating that religion book for kids. The "image of God" one...I still have it. Do you still have your essay?

You should draw. heiheihei.

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yannay is really drowning @ uni and will not be around DA much T______________T who said uni was much more relaxing than school~!?

yeah! You should join too!

xD Thanks. It's cute eh?

X____X it's a very complex picture and I just keep on procratinating/avoiding it.

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yannay is really drowning @ uni and will not be around DA much T______________T who said uni was much more relaxing than school~!?

Its pretty good!!

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Democritus-"Everywhere man blames nature and fate, yet his fate is mostly but the echo of his character and passions, his mistakes and weaknesses."
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See, I am listening to your constructive crits, too!

And mwahah, Kei-mannerisms invade! I was pointing out to Wen at some point on MSN, how you were using the sentence structure "How goes..." xDDD

What's a Jumper? o___O;;;

Er, what did I say before? xD

But Yan always draws in a similar style? I didn't write an essay, I did a picture book too, remember! Which also totally missed the point. xDDD

-is drawing- @__________________________@

(But because it is secret picture, it cannot be shown until March even after it is finished!! ;___; )

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Obsessed with Final Fantasy. Beware! // Is very busy at uni/college so will probably not be around much... @___@;;;

How adorable! It brings a little light to my day. Happy V-day to you!

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so cute and lovely! very nice done! lovely coloring!
Happy Valentines day!

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I commissioned someone on Gaia to draw a pic of me and Chris for his Valentine's present! [link]
And I just got my mug! Yaay! It's really cool.

i luv the teeny tiny heart! its really good!

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On a lighter note, i ate ur sandwich