I would say...that the left arm looks a bit awkward. Not that I can point out what's wrong, because I don't think it's glaringly obvious, it just looks awkward. I dunno'. I think the inking could've been a little bit tighter, too.
Overall though, these past couple uploads I think you're improving pretty damned fast. Which is cool. Keep going. 8DDD
So does your mom! Kidding I think the problem isn't so much with her collar bone as it is the placement of the line I drew for the front of her neck. But it makes the collarbone look wrong. This whole drawing is falling apart! hahaha
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"Oh God... I'm so alone!" ~ Scott Pilgrim Scott Pilgrim v.1: Precious Little Life
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Devious Comments
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Dude. I now have a sig.
Sweet!
Now if only I could have a Stig.....
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"Oh God... I'm so alone!" ~ Scott Pilgrim
Scott Pilgrim v.1: Precious Little Life
DJC
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Dude. I now have a sig.
Sweet!
Now if only I could have a Stig.....
Overall though, these past couple uploads I think you're improving pretty damned fast. Which is cool. Keep going. 8DDD
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"Oh God... I'm so alone!" ~ Scott Pilgrim
Scott Pilgrim v.1: Precious Little Life
DJC
I think the problem isn't so much with her collar bone as it is the placement of the line I drew for the front of her neck. But it makes the collarbone look wrong. This whole drawing is falling apart! hahaha
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"Oh God... I'm so alone!" ~ Scott Pilgrim
Scott Pilgrim v.1: Precious Little Life
DJC
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