Comment on My Box of Crayons by ~reluxi

Not a terribly unique viewpoint, but very well worded and presented clearly.

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate feedback. I think it's hard to have a real unique topic because there's so many people in this world now, and only so much to write about. Not that I'm making excuses, just an observation.

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Reluxi/April
Insane HP Groupie, resident Harry Potter and anime fanatic

"I'm so sane, it's driving me crazy."

o.o I like the use of elementary school. X3 you make it so nearly everyone, if not everyone, can realate. o_o which is a good thing for an essay like this methinks. ^^ i like the way the beginning, where you use the syno... synonym ._. i can never spell that word right... about the crayons to start everything off. And how you just drop it at that and go straight into the part about kidies in elmentary school X3 has a nice effect methinks.

X3 Im not much of a fan of essays >>;; i like downright fiction, X3 but the way you write them is diffrent.

>>;;; eep. I think I'll leave you alone now ; *skitters off to mind her own*

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To-to-RO!

Thanks for the compliments. Here's a secret, I hate essays too. ^_^

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reluxi/april

"I'm so sane, it's driving me crazy."

"Those who don't know how to weep with their whole heart, don't know how to laugh either." ~Golda Meir, a very smart woman with a great name

X3 you're muchly welcome. >>;; who doesnt hate essays?

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To-to-RO!