interesting, the anatomy of this dragon resembles a dog! Intersting drawings
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Let the strands of creation capture you,
see the splendor of that which is real,
but still be memorized by the possibility,
Let love, frustration, and sadness fill you,
and take you away on a journey
Their is nothing wrong with a dog looking dragon, just unquie
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Let the strands of creation capture you,
see the splendor of that which is real,
but still be memorized by the possibility,
Let love, frustration, and sadness fill you,
and take you away on a journey
J'adore ça! C'est vert et jeune! Mais, il y a rouge et orange aussi. Ma frère, il s'appellent joel, il aimes vert. C'est son couleur préféré. Ma couleur préférée est bleu^^. J'aime blanche aussi. J'aime parler en français. J'ai parlé avec mes amies en français aujourd-oui. C'était ammusant.
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"I'm old enough to know that a longer life isn't always a better one. Because in the end you just get tired. Tired of the struggle. Tired of loosing everyone that matters to you." - The Doctor
Great ! Your really good l'm pround of you ! You did only a few mistake !
J'adore ça! C'est vert et jAune! Mais, il y a DU rouge et DU orange aussi. MON frère, il s'appelle joel, il aime(le) vert. C'est SA couleur préféré. Ma couleur préférée est (le) bleu^^. J'aime (le) blanc aussi. J'aime parler en français. J'ai parlé avec mes amies en français aujourd-Hui. C'était amusant.
*Jaune: yellow *jeune: young *Ma: would be for a sister * You can't put an s after aime it's not like in english ^__^ *Sa: You need to put sa because color is a female word ^__^ * You can't put ent (appellent) since il is singular. It's your brother not your brothers
*Mais, il y a rouge et orange aussi: l'm not sure if you can say so, I guess it's right, but it's better with adding DU before each color. *Du could mean The. For exemple : J'ai manger du pain. (I ate bread)
*Once again you could have put Le before bleu and before blanc, but l'm not sure if you really need to put it :S ! *Blanc: You need to say blanc because there isn't a female object/subject: Ex: La chatte est blanche (the cat is white) or La vache est blanche et noir (the cow is white and black).
You need to use blanc if the object you describe is a male or if tere is no object: EX: Ma couleur préféré est le blanc (my favorite color is white) Ce chien est blanc (this dog is white) *Aujourd' Oui: is only the prononciation: When we speak we say aujourd'oui but when writting you need to put aujourd'hui
*Amusant: just one m
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