Je trouve le cadrage bon, le modèle évidemment participe beaucoup à cette jolie photo. En revanche, peut-être qu'avec une profondeur de champ bien plus grande, ou même bien plus petite, cela aurait selon moi magnifique, je trouve qu'ici elle n'est pas assez prononcée dans un des deux extrêmes. ,) [link]
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Yes, I can try in English here ,) I like the setting, the model of course, but I believe that with a bottom very vague or very clear, the picture would be exceptional. For the moment, I think that the shot is not enough on one side or the other (for the vague or clear bottom).
I hope to be clear ,),)
To conclude, this shot is really good !
I hope to be clear enough
-- Dream if you'll live forever. Live if you'll die today.
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