Comment on 21 November 2018 by *wordworks

This is amazing

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Though you may not express your feelings, you do project them.
I feel it, every time...
That is empathy...


Commission me! [link]

holy crap.

Amelia says hi, diary. Her hands are getting strong.

..dear lord, i love that

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blame it on the web, but the spider's your problem now.
language is the liquid that we're all dissolved in;
great for solving problems after it creates a problem.
-modest mouse

"Tell the little boy in his mother's dress that God hates him."

that's crazy!
haha xD...futuristic.

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eat crow

I love this. The wording builds the character so well, I can almost see her with her daughter in her lap.

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Say goodbye,
as we dance with the devil tonight,
don't you dare look at him in the eye...
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~Phoenix-Pyre made my TOTALLY AWESOME avatar. THANK YOU!

Simple, sweet piece with a very simple but realistic approach to the future.

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"We are fascinated by the darkness in ourselves, we are fascinated by the shadow, we are fascinated by the boogeyman."
-Anthony Hopkins

"Sanity calms, but madness is more interesting."
-John Russell

nice

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Fight back the demons around us, love lives and i will defend her.

nice! i like the clues as to how the future technology affects every day life both in the past and present. (or do i mean present and future?) you should continue this.

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"We can but watch from behind the Dalek-proof sofa, and wait."

(I forget where I stole this from.)


jaq in a box

Very interesting. Nice tone throughout, and you get a sense of who the character is and what she looks like through a few simply paragraphs. I love how you also estrange motherhood for the reader. She is a woman who most of us would be wary of letting around our children, but we also know, through her entry, that she loves her daughter as much as the next woman.

Thank you.

I loved this. You made it sound so--real, while still keeping in the sci-fi-ish theme, which is what any good science fiction/futuristic piece ought to do. 2018 is a touch close to the present, though, for all of the spiffing technology you mentioned.

I really enjoyed reading this. Must...colllect...(when is there going to be an emote for that, anyway?)

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"I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope and that enables you to laugh at life's realities."
-Dr. Seuss