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Comment on Dead End chapter 1 by ~Maxawesome

~jarredspekter:iconjarredspekter: Mar 22, 2008, 10:39:49 AM
This is much in the same spirit of the book World War Z, a sort of documentarian approach to a zombie invasion, or like Romero's recently Diary of the Dead! Very gritty and pretty realistic too (very, very creepy).
It's personal taste, but I keep wishing for a zombie or a disaster movie where the noble as well as the foul of humanity is exhibited in its struggles. It's difficult to care about folks who are consumed with negative emotion as much as you might for more heroic people, who maintain their morality and hope even in the face of despair. Case in point would be Lord of the Rings.
I liked the fast paced, very 'in the moment' style here. There are one or two spelling errors and grammatical problems, but with a little more editing it can be whipped into shape in no time.
A great start though. It will be interesting to see where you go with this one :thumbsup:
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Wy is a rvn lke a wrtng dsk?

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~jarredspekter:iconjarredspekter: Mar 22, 2008, 10:39:49 AM
This is much in the same spirit of the book World War Z, a sort of documentarian approach to a zombie invasion, or like Romero's recently Diary of the Dead! Very gritty and pretty realistic too (very, very creepy).
It's personal taste, but I keep wishing for a zombie or a disaster movie where the noble as well as the foul of humanity is exhibited in its struggles. It's difficult to care about folks who are consumed with negative emotion as much as you might for more heroic people, who maintain their morality and hope even in the face of despair. Case in point would be Lord of the Rings.
I liked the fast paced, very 'in the moment' style here. There are one or two spelling errors and grammatical problems, but with a little more editing it can be whipped into shape in no time.
A great start though. It will be interesting to see where you go with this one :thumbsup:
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Wy is a rvn lke a wrtng dsk?
~blackflamearmy:iconblackflamearmy: Mar 22, 2008, 3:25:41 PM
hey im his brother and i wrote it but thanks for the comment, if u liked that try my book Unholy:[link]
~Maxawesome:iconMaxawesome: Mar 22, 2008, 3:32:39 PM
Thanks man, that means alot. I come up with it my brother writes it. BlackFlameArmy check out his series unholy.
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