Comment on 36 Reach for You :Full: by ~IvoryTuesdays[top] [parent]

This is a beautiful picture. I was glancing though your gallery, and I'm very impressed with the improvement you show!

A little thing that I notice, the girl on the top of the picture: the line from her bottom lip to chin seems rather straight. With more people, there is a dip under the lip, and it curves out to the chin.

The wings on them bother a very nice, i like the semi-transparency to them.

I do have one question though - i'm not really sure what the blue rays are from the top?

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"Asking a working actor what he thinks about critics is like asking a lamp-post how it feels about dogs"
--Christopher Hampton.

Thank you for your wonderful critique and the blue is crystal and its breaking thats also why the fragments are falling into his hands. In my story she had his son and heaven punished her by locking her in living crystal.

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Don't let yourself be fooled into reality.
Just go visit every so often so it wont get lonely.

Okay, i see it now! It's sad she'd be locked away...

either way, it's a very moving piece, and quite beautiful!

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"Asking a working actor what he thinks about critics is like asking a lamp-post how it feels about dogs"
--Christopher Hampton.

Thank you!

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Don't let yourself be fooled into reality.
Just go visit every so often so it wont get lonely.

I'll comment back here, becuase I feel weird commenting on your journal... But i happen'd to come back to check on you, and I saw it. I wish I knew you irl, so I could Hug you.

I mostly feel i need to comment back, because i LOVE this piece. It's easily my favorite here on DeviantART. I'm so disheartened to see so little fav's or comments. I can feel that you spent a great deal of time and energy on it.

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"Asking a working actor what he thinks about critics is like asking a lamp-post how it feels about dogs"
--Christopher Hampton.

Ya! (sorry I didn't fav it eariler... instead of wading though my deviations, i jsut delted them all )

It's beautiful tues - i love the hair!

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"In truth, there was only ever one Christian, and he died on the Cross."
~Nietzsche

hey hey everyone has to start some where! Just because alot of people dosent know me dosen't dishearten me but enthuses me to work harder!!!

*Reaches her hand out*
Then be my friend! know me! I love being social ^.^

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Don't let yourself be fooled into reality.
Just go visit every so often so it wont get lonely.

verrrrrrry nice! very nice indeed!

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- An it Harm None, Do What you Will -
"The commiseration with the animals is intimately united with the
kindness of character, in such a way that it can be affirmed for sure, that who is cruel with the animals cannot be good person" - Schopenhauer