Comment on untitled, gesturing children by *mgilpin[parent]

i like it!! well done...

Nice, but you should maybe remove the thing on the right...

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Bang bang, he shot me down / Bang bang, I hit the ground
Bang bang, that awful sound / Bang bang, my baby shot me down.

mmm. fancy words.
the pole on the right is annoying me, and i think a crop would help anyway...
the focus is fantastic.. because they are each so sharp, they seem to merge as one. which turns the boys into forms i guess... the angles of their arms becomes more pronounced when you look at it that way, which im sure im preaching to the converted here. (i just want reassurance ) What am i trying to say? well... that it works nicely as a sort of optical illusion.. the more you look, the more things change. OR i might just be reading into it a bit much.
And that environment, its so sparse! way cool. do you live near/in a rural area? i know weve seen it before.

that pole! it has some nerve!

but i do like the otherwise rural/plain atmosphere and the lighting.

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Comma splices make me cry.

Ah....the decisive moment. I think he just liked to think he was in that much control.

Are you teaching those boys tai chi?

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Let yourself go.

i wish... this was one of those moments that has no real significance... but there is something about the gesture/forms that seems to invite projection...

do you do tai chi?...

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'a witty saying proves nothing.' - Voltaire

thank you...

and, yes... damn that pole!...

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'a witty saying proves nothing.' - Voltaire

I used to...haven't done it since I came to Chicago. Should start that up again.

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Let yourself go.

thank you, mrs claus...

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'a witty saying proves nothing.' - Voltaire