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Comment on Dunking curve by ~YVS51

~moon-send:iconmoon-send: Mar 29, 2008, 3:30:09 AM
this is a great piece, i love that you made each one a different player!

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~moon-send:iconmoon-send: Mar 29, 2008, 3:30:09 AM
this is a great piece, i love that you made each one a different player!

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~destructorv1:icondestructorv1: Mar 29, 2008, 6:31:49 AM
+ the details are well done
+ great job on having the shortest to tallest, nice thinking, if its a coincidence, well, heh,. great stuff!

- but you gotta have the 1st guy (dun like saying their names, sorry) be aligned with the others. hes flying.
- no other comment.

great job!

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~Ickleronny:iconIckleronny: Mar 29, 2008, 6:40:25 AM
oi oi oi!!! No jabbing at self allowed! Something is better than nothing, right?
I think the last two guys' transition is not smooth enough.

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~YVS51:iconYVS51: Mar 29, 2008, 8:18:44 AM
What no other comment.

Serious? Then I'll have to stick him to the ground then XD Thanks!
~YVS51:iconYVS51: Mar 29, 2008, 8:19:50 AM
*Jabs at self*
Ok....Maybe without the guy in the middle it'll be better. Thanks! :D
~YVS51:iconYVS51: Mar 29, 2008, 8:20:24 AM
Thank you! You have no idea how happy you made me XD
~destructorv1:icondestructorv1: Mar 29, 2008, 8:47:22 AM
that means, that is all.

but i can suggest something to try out, making the inking have thick vs thin strokes, have you seen those American comic inking? yeah, like so. even if. this is japanese art. i know, but, just suggesting...

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~YVS51:iconYVS51: Mar 29, 2008, 9:00:57 AM
I'm not japanese, hence it's not considered japanese art. XD Even though the characters are japanese. I'm still not used with that G-pen yet, so patience....XD
I'd scratch the paper and make a hole outta it with the sharp nib....
~destructorv1:icondestructorv1: Mar 29, 2008, 9:42:15 AM
haha.. its ok, it takes time to master it. keep it up!

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~moon-send:iconmoon-send: Mar 29, 2008, 2:11:58 PM
i'm glad that your happy, this is a really good piece!

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