Subscribe Now
Buy deviantWEAR
Advertise Here
[x]
All Deviations

Comment on Betterment For Humanity by =Emerald-Wolf86[top] [parent]

~Windancerx7x:iconWindancerx7x: Apr 1, 2008, 7:22:08 PM
hehe thanks! ^^ Yea, he probably will ;p

--
~*~ gina

Devious Comments

~blight2:iconblight2: Mar 31, 2008, 3:41:12 AM
Nicely done I love your ballad poems so captivating
=Emerald-Wolf86:iconEmerald-Wolf86: Mar 31, 2008, 3:51:36 AM
wow thanks Blight, I love writing ballad style poems, much more than most other styles, the only one I can really say I enjoy writing as much, are accrostic style poems, as that's where my poetic origins lay, when I began back in high school.

I must have been about 14 when I started writing, and overall I think I've produced some quite good pieces.. however, this one has to be one of my favourites:D

thanks for the comment, and the support:hug:
~AmayasFantasy:iconAmayasFantasy: Mar 31, 2008, 12:35:54 PM
Lovely! this is an awesome ballad! you did marvously! I am writing a story in epic form, and its hard... its going to be as long as a novel, if I can. I was inspired after I read the Canterbury Tales for the 1000th time, as well as Beowulf.... *keeps her fingers crossed*

Anyway, this is fantastic!!! Awesomely great job!

--
In my own salvation
And your eternal slumber
Legend shall speak
Of sacrifice at world’s end
The wind sails over the water’s surface
Quietly, but surely
~ Loveless

Yes, I still clean for Shinra... Wheres my benefits?
~Windancerx7x:iconWindancerx7x: Mar 31, 2008, 8:17:52 PM
There's a lot of truth in this, as sad as it may be =[. I love the irony in the chorus where it says "Things have advanced way too far, mankind have lost their sanity"

--
~*~ gina
=Emerald-Wolf86:iconEmerald-Wolf86: Apr 1, 2008, 7:19:30 PM
thanks windancer, I enjoyed your piece too, mattiello's going to have a tough time judging this competition lol:D
~Windancerx7x:iconWindancerx7x: Apr 1, 2008, 7:22:08 PM
hehe thanks! ^^ Yea, he probably will ;p

--
~*~ gina
~toxicangel13:icontoxicangel13: Apr 2, 2008, 12:09:58 PM
:clap: very well written Ony ^^

--
You're just jealous cuz we act retarded in public and people still love us
=Emerald-Wolf86:iconEmerald-Wolf86: Apr 7, 2008, 12:23:34 AM
lol not bad, i think this style of poetry im suited to best:D
~toxicangel13:icontoxicangel13: Apr 7, 2008, 3:46:54 PM
^^

--
You're just jealous cuz we act retarded in public and people still love us
Previous Page    12    Next Page
Sign up to leave feedback! <3
©2008 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy