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*Themissg:iconThemissg: Apr 4, 2008, 9:25:48 PM
:heart: I still love it~~~ :D :D :D
^_^ Especially the beginning, where you describe the light coming through the curtain *dont ask why I just do*

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=maeoneechan:iconmaeoneechan: Apr 4, 2008, 9:33:27 PM Mood: Joy
Thank you~ I'm glad you enjoyed it! I liked the beginning too :>

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=maeoneechan:iconmaeoneechan: Apr 5, 2008, 9:51:10 AM
No its not = _ =;;;;; I think its horrible... GAAAAAAH. D:

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=FaultyLogic:iconFaultyLogic: Apr 5, 2008, 11:38:04 AM
Wow I absolutely loved it
I love all the details you threw in
they were subtle, but still noticeable and fit in perfectly
=]

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=maeoneechan:iconmaeoneechan: Apr 5, 2008, 7:54:04 PM Mood: Adoration
Really?? Thank you so much TTwTT It makes me very happy to hear that! :glomp:

You're not just saying that to be nice now are you? :greetings:

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=FaultyLogic:iconFaultyLogic: Apr 5, 2008, 9:12:43 PM
No way!!
Seriously, it as a really wonderful piece!!
You've got some nice talent as a writer
It was such a sweet story :heart:
Plus you wrote it in a style that I really enjoy
You identified the characters, not with names, but relationships and their actions and their thoughts
and like I said before, I love all the subtle details =]

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Man stands in his own shadow and wonders why it's dark.
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~bgoldie86:iconbgoldie86: Apr 5, 2008, 9:23:49 PM Mood: Happy
Wow!!! I love it! this is really great! and the short story too! I am, also, so glad I finally got to work with you today!!! YAY! :D :thumb81904960:

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