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Comment on 24 hour challenge by ~Shuya

u have to teach me!

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Funny!

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When would anyone use this “smilie”? :analprobe:

Answer1: You don’t want to know…

Answer2: So I went to the doctor last week…:analprobe:…I don’t like my doctor
u have to teach me!

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Keep an open mind...life's better that way...
haha, I was working on this as I was talking to you

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Hahaha, sweet animation.
I quit trying to use Flash ages ago, nice to see you're still doin it.

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SHOW ME YOUR MOVES
I like this, the bear part is hilarious but think it could be pushed more.

It very much seems to cool but that skinny pole with a platform on top doesn't seem to fit with the rest of it. I also think that the anticipation needs secondary action to give him character and build up to the anticipation. The Roadrunner is a great reference to use. The force of him standing still jumping onto that platform doesn't sell, unless of course he's Micheal Jordan or Doctor J. Look at long jumping. It makes it hard to propel yourself without a run up to the jump or arms. He doesn't seem like he's prepared to jump to the otherside. Rework the beginning more.

Also those dash-marks that show up when he runs off the cliff takes me out of the animation. It seems arbitrary.

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I'd rather take an endless amount of baby steps than a few giant big ones.

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