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Comment on Bucket boy by =masked-racoon

~kmwright:iconkmwright: Apr 14, 2008, 1:39:27 PM
These poems are pretty good. Just make sure you don't put your feelings in there so obvious. make your readers curious on what you are trying to say.

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~Caphriel:iconCaphriel: Apr 14, 2008, 7:23:19 AM Mood: Joy
Nice man! Jah bless you!
=masked-racoon:iconmasked-racoon: Apr 14, 2008, 7:33:56 AM
Thanks
=)

anything in particular about it that you liked?

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there are so many lies in the world today
and someone's got to tell them.....
~Caphriel:iconCaphriel: Apr 14, 2008, 7:39:23 AM
That have a nice form and this is easy for translate for me:D
=masked-racoon:iconmasked-racoon: Apr 14, 2008, 7:42:29 AM
:D
cool

So what is you're mother lanuage then?
you're first tounge?

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there are so many lies in the world today
and someone's got to tell them.....
~tyrannusBE:icontyrannusBE: Apr 14, 2008, 7:45:51 AM
I like the way it comes over all destorted.

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We can bomb the world to pieces, but we can't bomb it into peace.

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~Caphriel:iconCaphriel: Apr 14, 2008, 10:13:54 AM
My mother language?? I'm speaking in polish(mother language), russian and japanese(study). My english is very bad. I have learned(???) some word when I'm listening Bob Marley and others artists who talking in english.
~kmwright:iconkmwright: Apr 14, 2008, 1:39:27 PM
These poems are pretty good. Just make sure you don't put your feelings in there so obvious. make your readers curious on what you are trying to say.
~captaincabbage:iconcaptaincabbage: Apr 14, 2008, 2:39:30 PM
cool. really cool.

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When I'm weak, I draw strength from you,
and when you're sad I know how to change your mood.
When I'm down you breath life over me,
Although we're miles apart we are each other's destiny.
~imokyoureok:iconimokyoureok: Apr 14, 2008, 6:42:24 PM
who robbed the rich
and killed the poo

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Smile...it confuses people (if those people are retards). Smiling is actually supposed to communicate you're feeling happy. lolololololo
=masked-racoon:iconmasked-racoon: Apr 14, 2008, 11:44:38 PM
Took you guys long enough to find that!:shakefist:

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there are so many lies in the world today
and someone's got to tell them.....