Comment on Sea Princess by ~Redfauxofenigmas

Ouu X3 Why....are they chained together? Ish teh girl unhappy?
Anyway, I really like the guy's tail X3
Buuut maybe things like the background need a little more depth? The kelp, for one, seems sorta flat, as it's the only thing without shadows in the picture. X3;
Also, you might want to elaborate on the black hole/ cave/ ocean??? behind them a little more....there's not a lot of transition between the color and straight black, so it's hard to tell what it's supposed to be like.
As for the characters~..... I like them, lol. I can't really critique them because I don't know much about dolphin/eel anatomy or anything X3;;

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awww poor girl @ @

the only critique that I can find is the background, it's a bit plain

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Thank you!

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She's an orca XD
Thanks for the critique~ Next time I'll use a reference for ocean scenery.

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Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.- Norman Cousins

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XD Sorry, lol. It's hard to tell when they use abnormal colors (Aaaand I've never read it, so naturally I wouldn't know X3 )

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mhum

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My internet won't let me see that deviant's page! I remember seeing it a long time ago and thinking that gallery was quite amazing. Nice fan art, it looks like a cute story. I love the girl's expression, and you're so good with water colors!

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Celestial Violence

you're so sweet! Thank you sushi-chan!

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