Comment on Difference of Opinion by ~Citanula

Gasp, you finished already!

It's amusing, not nearly as melodramatic as the others, something funny for once. I do have to say that the idea of a kid hiding from a parent seems a little bit worn out... I love the ending though.

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I don't really get what you mean by 'worn out'.

This is NOT my major work. This is some 'Into Hiding' thing that Mrs Mason made us do, amongst the many other things. Major Work comes after her other three billion assignments.

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"peaking into the rooms," - peeking.

"Quickly, he moved onto," - moved "on"?

"His parents had told him that little children should not play with electric things." - just leave it at "electricity".

"Ben allowed himself to be lead downstairs, to the dining room." - led.

"Happily, he ate one leaf." - according to my limited knowledge of them, I don't think you can...eat one leaf...like that.

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Well I guess my C&Ving wasn't that...long.

...and if you posted it on CW, I just wasted all that space on DA.

now I'll have to C&V it back over. =="

Like the tone and the melodrama. As in, the exaggerated suspense. Really cute.

And is there some particular reason you're capitalising Brussels sprouts?

Oh great, the spell check thing told me that brussels was not a word. >>"

Anyhow. Now that your post has reminded me, I may as well check CW.

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Yeah, thanks. The Brussels thing was that apparently they were named for where they come from and MS Word keeps telling me it's wrong otherwise.

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Ohh, I see.

...quoth Kowalski~

"Germany is EBIL."

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It is never too late to be what you might have been.

You're not allowed to finish when I haven't even started. T_T

And I did enjoy it!

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Don't worry, there's still the Major Work to go. And I CAN'T finish if you haven't because we have to do the peer evaluation.

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lulz!!! nice story xD

i like ending

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ben sounds a lawt like someone i know kinda

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o yea, and for a name, i wouldve called it 'that's what you think' or something buh thts just me....

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