and this is why I like your poetry

you've started off with something that could mean anything, which sends me thinking of what it could be about,
and then and then
the second stanza!

and You soldered our memories
Into a frangible faux fiction
And I, the poet?
Found an apathetic knack,
Of seldom writing back.


with the boldness in some parts and questions it's got a personal meaning that while I'm not completely sure I've understood, there's enough imaginative text here for me to create my own meaning.

Bravo, I say.

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Dum spiro spero.

Wow, your writing is just as beautiful as ever.

The simple stars which fell
Between forging friends
And text book conversation


Those hands which creased the heavens into angles

That line tells so much to me.
<3

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Now ask me if there's water in hell.

this is one of the most beautiful things I have read in the last year..

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Every fortress has a weak spot.

Thank you.
It's the story of a friendship, or part of it at least.

Interpret it however you like my friend. Your feedback is much appreciated

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the sun does rise

Thank you

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the sun does rise

Thank you, I believe beautiful things stem from beautiful people I guess. Writing about someone you love (when it's not of the unrequited kind) yields pretty words.

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the sun does rise

giving poetry a fresh dose of essence thank sub3r3 for the link...

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life sucks, eat strawberries

I shall do again and have done previously
Thank you.

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the sun does rise

I always end up reading your poems over and over. Instinctively, I think, "I like it!" but I want to provide a better comment than that.

The rhyme at the end is nicely done, deft and precise. Congrats on that.

Blah blah blah perfect imagery blah blah blah perfect word choice etc etc etc.

I'm trying to think of some kind of improvement. I see two things, and neither is terribly strong. First off, the content of the poem, that is, the story behind it, seems thinly expressed. I can't think of any way to strengthen, so that's not much help.

The other thing is that it might be too unaccessible by less educated readers. However, I cringe at writing that. That's not an issue, it's motivation for people to think more.

Good job.

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Are you sure which side of the glass you are on?