Comment on Flynn in the Rigging by *CapnFlynn[top] [parent]

Wow!
He lloks like he's enjoying himself.
First comment! W00T!

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"Oh Elphaba."
"...hmm?"
"Kee-keep doing that?"
"As you wish, my sweet."
"Ohhhhh, sweet Oz Elphie, you're magnificent."
"Elphaba the Magnificent...I like it."
-My upcoming Gelphie fic, "Don't Dream Too Far"

lol, you're my first "first comment"! XD

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Whoo!

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"Oh Elphaba."
"...hmm?"
"Kee-keep doing that?"
"As you wish, my sweet."
"Ohhhhh, sweet Oz Elphie, you're magnificent."
"Elphaba the Magnificent...I like it."
-My upcoming Gelphie fic, "Don't Dream Too Far"

YAAAY for your title skills!!!!!!!!!!! ....and not to mention your art skills! Woottt

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Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate's life for me!

Jack Sparrow: We'll have to fight... to run away!

Icon made by *Picormdwe

Beautiful sense of atmosphere and excellent composition. Well done all around.

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Great pose, I love the bright coloring.

You should probably have a watermark anyways, just in case.

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"And what constitutes evil, real evil, is the taking of a single human life. Whether a man would die tomorrow or the day after or eventually... it doesn't matter. Because if God does not exist, then life... every second of it... Is all we have." --Louis

I like the composition. A very clear background and foreground - it's dynamic. I like the way the horizon bends, and the light hitting the waves.

There's something that bothers me with Flynn's anatomy, though. He looks almost too bendy or rubbery. I think it's his neck, it bends awkwardly and/or is too long. If his upper arm was more straight (thus he would be more like hanging from it), I could believe that angle.

My favorite part is the colouring. I think you've gotten better at it. Flynn looks very 3D - especially the pants and the coat flaps flying in the wind.

Looks great ! I like a lot the water and the sky. I need to work more on my own backgrounds.

Where are the pirate babes ?

You may want to take a look at foxfires' some of her pieces have her watermark on them in interesting ways -- like she almost incorporates the watermark image into her picture.

Take a look at this: [link] and this: [link]

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But there's no sense crying over every mistake.
You just keep on trying till you run out of cake.
And the Science gets done. And you make a neat gun.
For the people who are still alive.
--Glados

Ugh, I just flipped it in Photoshop to check, and you are totally right; he's got like a turtle neck or something. Argh. I have a long-neck problem in general, but it's usually exaggerated with Flynn. I guess he tends to stick his neck out or something, hahaha. >_<

Thanks for the compliments and the pointing out of that problem!

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