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Comment on Risan in Verse by =Francine1991

~Rogetsuren:iconRogetsuren: May 1, 2008, 4:26:40 PM
great! the rhymes really got me into it. and the imagery is amazing. good job ^^

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~GladElf:iconGladElf: May 1, 2008, 6:42:45 AM
I like it...I have pretty much no skill for poetry, but I like the way you used your words to describe the character. It sparks my interest in his story.

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=Francine1991:iconFrancine1991: May 1, 2008, 6:46:45 AM
Thank you. :)

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~darkestpoetrylover:icondarkestpoetrylover: May 1, 2008, 2:45:56 PM
very good description, I liked it a lot. It was excellently done and the rhyme was very good too.

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~michaelphelpsismine:iconmichaelphelpsismine: May 1, 2008, 3:04:42 PM
It is written very well, this guy sounds kind of intriguing! I would like to read more about him. :)

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~Rogetsuren:iconRogetsuren: May 1, 2008, 4:26:40 PM
great! the rhymes really got me into it. and the imagery is amazing. good job ^^

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*chocokitten:iconchocokitten: May 1, 2008, 6:06:57 PM
Very nice! invokes my love of Snape :blush:
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~shukugumo:iconshukugumo: May 1, 2008, 8:43:01 PM
A playboy..... if there is anybody matches the description, I'll kill myself =)

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=Francine1991:iconFrancine1991: May 2, 2008, 1:09:45 AM
Poor Risan lol he can't help being the scum of the earth. ;)

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=Francine1991:iconFrancine1991: May 2, 2008, 1:09:54 AM
Hehe thank you. :)

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=Francine1991:iconFrancine1991: May 2, 2008, 1:10:03 AM
:) Thank you

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