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You know my reaction on this, as I read it in front of you. Great piece! I really like this a lot. Very creative and emotive with the way you worded the characters feelings when they smoke.

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Thank you so very much. I'm glad I could paint pictures for you and instill emotions.

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hmm. This is interesting
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That was a pretty good description of smoking. XD

The last paragraph is my favorite and besides that I don't think there is anything for me to critique on.

Great job! Good luck in that contest. *goes to read about contest* XD

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Fabulous!
Oh my goodness, I absolutely adore your short stories, and this one is the best! Where'd you get the idea for this?

I thought I replied to this, but I guess I accidentally replied to the wrong comment, thinking it was this one? anyway, I'll write the reply again!

well, basically, I've smaked a couple of cigs before, so I remember the feeling. And there are those that come in from smoking, complaining that they're wet. I usually just tell them that if that is the case, then stop smoking. lol

Thank you so much!

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hmm. This is interesting
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Lol. yeah, it was. I used to smoke, a long while ago.

Thank you so much!

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hmm. This is interesting
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Feel The *RawEm0tion burn in

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"L'identité est important quand tu veux savoir le monde"

I've never smoked, and glad to say that I never will. XD

You're sooo welcome!

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Haha, okay. XD
Replied to the mistake one. haha.