[x]

deviantART

 
it makes me think of the Bridge to Terebithia... sort of.

--
002110 Goto 013500
013500 Peek 16388, 236
013510 Poke 16389, 346

Devious Comments

Ho snap.
You hit quite a few nails on their various heads here.

I love this. I love the repetition of 'likes' and 'whens'

It makes it flow in this perfectly imperfect way.
Just like life. :)

Then again. You know that you are one of the most amazing writers about life in general already, don't you?

Congrats on another thoroughly stunning piece my good man :)

<333

--
:bulletpink::bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:
"Where the Spirit does not Work with the Hand there is No Art" -Da Vinci
it makes me think of the Bridge to Terebithia... sort of.

--
002110 Goto 013500
013500 Peek 16388, 236
013510 Poke 16389, 346
your words always affect me. pretty amazing.

--
wish i had a socket-set to dismantle this morning.
and just one pair of clean socks.
and a photo of you.
the last stanza in particular really grabbed me.
beautifully written, as always.

--
even the garden of eden was just a big fancy cage.
This is cool! ^_^
I hate your amazingness. :P
this is stunning
and
every bit was something i wish i could have written.

--
new deviantart: [link]
:clap:

--
"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
"and what
if I was
a breath you mistook
when
once was enough"


:clap:
:worship:

--
Buddy Epsom Salts
God I love you. Everything you write is perfection.

--
I know what a prince and lover ought to be.

Site Map