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Rub in sun tan lotion is that? :P

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"The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one," he said.
"The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one ... but still, they come."

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It's very true. I was generally warmer in London though ... I think the smog does it. Keeps the city warm.

But the weather here is beautiful :D

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"The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one," he said.
"The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one ... but still, they come."
Rub it in, why don't you? :P
Rub in sun tan lotion is that? :P

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"The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one," he said.
"The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one ... but still, they come."
Sounds like winter here ^^ Good description and contrast.

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I love the way you describe things. After reading this, I now have a pretty good idea what winter feels like. I've never really experienced winter; it's either rain or sun here, where I live.

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It's curious for me because I really thought I knew what winter was all about. But since moving down here it's been an entirely different experience!

Thank you very much for reading. :heart:
The only thing that baffled me was, if it's that bloody cold outside why were the windows accidentally left open.

>.>

Great piece, though. Thoroughly enjoyed it, didn't really catch any pesky mistakes.

The plurals here caught my attention upon re-reading, however:

I wear layers and layers of unfamiliar clothes: stockings, vests, gloves, scarves, hats, long jackets, even thermal underwear. -- does your narrator wear more than one vest in the layering? More than one jacket? (the rest make sense).

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