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I like the pointy shoes ~

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I love the idea, and the color scheme and the folds and shading on Meg's dress. But I was a little confused by the next to last panel--I didn't quite make the connection and couldn't tell if this was a new injury or if blood was leaking from around the pillow. I think if I'd thought about it more, I might have gotten it better but your explanation was there so I didn't take the time to puzzle it out.

Still, it's a nice piece and a good entry! There should be more crazy Meg.

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The Fifth Cellar, a dedicated all-canon Phantom of the Opera fanfiction archive.
Wow... excellent entry - but yeah, the next to last panel seemed like it was covering a wound. And killing Madame Giry? Dude, you're making this like the end of Hamlet where everyone dies. Anyhow, looks fab and good luck in the contest! :D

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"Even the darkest people have their lighter side." - Jeremy Brett, Actor
Thanks! Maybe if I added more obviously dripping blood in the second-to-last panel... Although I don't think I want to work on this anymore. :bored: I really wanted to do an "everyone dies" ending - the managers, Carlotta, Piangi, and Mssr. Reyer are most likely dead too. :evillaugh:

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"Every normal man must be tempted at times to spit on his hands, hoist the black flag, and begin to slit throats." -H.L. Mencken
Thanks. Yes, that is rather unclear - I struggled with how to do that panel in particular. I was kind of disappointed because I didn't do justice to an idea I really liked, but ah well, experimentation... Glad you like it!

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"Every normal man must be tempted at times to spit on his hands, hoist the black flag, and begin to slit throats." -H.L. Mencken
I like the pointy shoes ~
that is really clever, but second last panel Erik is dead right

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Happily Ever After does not exist. Why do you think we read and write romance novels? We read and write about what we want in life knowing that we will never have it. ~my own realization
Pictorial storytelling is hard. You're having to do two things at once that are hard enough by themselves.

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The Fifth Cellar, a dedicated all-canon Phantom of the Opera fanfiction archive.
So tragic, but I like the original idea.

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Survivor of Phantom of Manhattan.
wild and wonderful...this is great!
i love it!

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Thank you. And yes, that's his blood dripping down.

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"Every normal man must be tempted at times to spit on his hands, hoist the black flag, and begin to slit throats." -H.L. Mencken

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