this is a wonderful piece of poetry, although i would be careful about saying the whole world is corrupt. Beauty exists in that which is untouched by humanity. Its small, but it exists and is timeless.
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this is a wonderful piece of poetry, although i would be careful about saying the whole world is corrupt. Beauty exists in that which is untouched by humanity. Its small, but it exists and is timeless.
True, true. I guess what I was getting at is the feeling, rather than the absolute... there have been times when it feels like the whole world is corrupt to the core. Perhaps society--or some equivalent-- would be a better choice of wording?
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If the seas must boil, let them, and if the earth must split, let it; for these entities have been following the ebb and flow of chaos for untold millennia and will continue to do so with little regard for human thought or care.
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If the seas must boil, let them, and if the earth must split, let it; for these entities have been following the ebb and flow of chaos for untold millennia and will continue to do so with little regard for human thought or care.
True, i think there are more days that make you feel like the whole world is corrupt than not, which is a rather depressing thought. I think even dispite your abiguous choice of wording, it still comes across well, which shows your talent as a poet.
Well, thanks! I appreciate it.
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If the seas must boil, let them, and if the earth must split, let it; for these entities have been following the ebb and flow of chaos for untold millennia and will continue to do so with little regard for human thought or care.
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If the seas must boil, let them, and if the earth must split, let it; for these entities have been following the ebb and flow of chaos for untold millennia and will continue to do so with little regard for human thought or care.
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