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Comment on Unspoken by *zay-el [parent]

:iconzay-el:
Thank you very much, both for the comment AND the fav!! ^__^ I'm happy you like it so much...so interesting, nearly every single person who'd read it so far had some similar experience already. At least this means I can somewhat enter a girl's head...this will surely come in handy, since I won't make these mistakes to avoid these kind of emotions punches. 83 Heh...also ironic a bit since I'm TOTALLY inexperienced with relationships. XD

No problem about that, I'm happy you're read it in the end. ^_^ :hug:

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:iconlimely:
I've already commented on this on PC... but I'll comment again, because I liked it so damn much.

*luffles on the fic once more*

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:iconzay-el:
Thank you very much for both comments, AND the fav!! ^__^ Seems like I really made an impression on you. 83

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:iconlimely:
You did. I really felt that I could relate. : D

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:iconrayfan:
Ugh, this has a feeling of way too much reality. What is worse than offering your love to someone who's too much of a dolt to appreciate it? :frustrated:

Very nicely done though. :D

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:iconzay-el:
He-he, I might be bringing a bit too much of real life over into the Rayman world, but I think that even though a lot of things are different, emotions are the same in both worlds. I imagine Ray might be good in many aspects, but he might be a bit oblivious to deeper feelings than friendship. Though the way I portray him sometimes changes from fic to fic... :D

Thank you very much. ^_^ I'm getting a bit more used to doing short stories like this lately, insteado of my main fanfic. 83

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Yeah, I can see the Rayman (especially of R3) being that way. (And I know what you mean, it's interesting to experiment with the characters, changing them a bit from one story to another. I used to do that a lot.)

Anyway, writing lots of short stories is good practice. :)

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:iconzay-el:
It gives me a chance to explore a character from different sides, and besides, it's fun to see how they'd react to different kind of situations, with slightly altered personalities. 83

I think so too. ^^ It's good to get into different kind of roles, so later on I'll be able to do even better with my main fanfic. :D

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Zay, this is absolutely wonderful. All the words you put into this tied up and bonded together beautifully. And I completely agree with Ly on some points... I felt EXACTLY like her with a certain boy once. This mixes darkness and beauty together... It's magnificent! An instant fave, indeed.

I'm very sorry if I never commented on PC. I'm constantly leaving and rejoining.

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:iconzay-el:
Thank you very much, both for the comment AND the fav!! ^__^ I'm happy you like it so much...so interesting, nearly every single person who'd read it so far had some similar experience already. At least this means I can somewhat enter a girl's head...this will surely come in handy, since I won't make these mistakes to avoid these kind of emotions punches. 83 Heh...also ironic a bit since I'm TOTALLY inexperienced with relationships. XD

No problem about that, I'm happy you're read it in the end. ^_^ :hug:

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History abhors a paradox...
I'm the Repo, LEGAL ASSASSIN!!!

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