Thank you very much, both for the comment AND the fav!! ^__^ I'm happy you like it so much...so interesting, nearly every single person who'd read it so far had some similar experience already. At least this means I can somewhat enter a girl's head...this will surely come in handy, since I won't make these mistakes to avoid these kind of emotions punches. 83 Heh...also ironic a bit since I'm TOTALLY inexperienced with relationships. XD
No problem about that, I'm happy you're read it in the end. ^_^
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He-he, I might be bringing a bit too much of real life over into the Rayman world, but I think that even though a lot of things are different, emotions are the same in both worlds. I imagine Ray might be good in many aspects, but he might be a bit oblivious to deeper feelings than friendship. Though the way I portray him sometimes changes from fic to fic...
Thank you very much. ^_^ I'm getting a bit more used to doing short stories like this lately, insteado of my main fanfic. 83
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Yeah, I can see the Rayman (especially of R3) being that way. (And I know what you mean, it's interesting to experiment with the characters, changing them a bit from one story to another. I used to do that a lot.)
Anyway, writing lots of short stories is good practice.
It gives me a chance to explore a character from different sides, and besides, it's fun to see how they'd react to different kind of situations, with slightly altered personalities. 83
I think so too. ^^ It's good to get into different kind of roles, so later on I'll be able to do even better with my main fanfic.
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Zay, this is absolutely wonderful. All the words you put into this tied up and bonded together beautifully. And I completely agree with Ly on some points... I felt EXACTLY like her with a certain boy once. This mixes darkness and beauty together... It's magnificent! An instant fave, indeed.
I'm very sorry if I never commented on PC. I'm constantly leaving and rejoining.
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Thank you very much, both for the comment AND the fav!! ^__^ I'm happy you like it so much...so interesting, nearly every single person who'd read it so far had some similar experience already. At least this means I can somewhat enter a girl's head...this will surely come in handy, since I won't make these mistakes to avoid these kind of emotions punches. 83 Heh...also ironic a bit since I'm TOTALLY inexperienced with relationships. XD
No problem about that, I'm happy you're read it in the end. ^_^
-- History abhors a paradox... I'm the Repo, LEGAL ASSASSIN!!!
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No problem about that, I'm happy you're read it in the end. ^_^
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History abhors a paradox...
I'm the Repo, LEGAL ASSASSIN!!!