spanio's avatar
It's cool, but I have a few things to mention that could use work. First of all, if this is supposed to be an intro, then that would mean that normally something would follow that intro. Thus, it's my opinion that the current intro is too long.
Secondly, in the one part when they're moving towards the "camera," some of them seem to just dissappear. It's actually distracting, and I think it would look better if they got much bigger before vanishing off screen.... and they probably would look better growing and sliding off screen simultaneously. I hope you know what I mean by that.
Once again, these are only my opinions, but I felt I should share them. Good work though.