I think you have an impressive grasp of what I wanted to say through this poem my friend!
But let me add a thought to yours here for a second~
"You search for love but it destroys you in return." - Quite true, but the difference between "love" and true love is that the latter, when you're blessed with finding it, destroys you completely and builds you anew, better than before in care of she who you now belong to.
That, my friend, is true love.
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
Thank you so much for the support and for coming back around! This poem means a lot to me, and it was truly hard to put together since I'm not used to writing with words like these. However, I do think that I tried hard enough and it came out to make me quite happy~!
It's been a good day meeting a ton of fantastic people; I appreciate you for being one of them!
Thank again! ~Bladegrasp
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
This is a very creative way of showing what love is.
It felt like there's an irony in it - like, you search for love but it destroys you in return. Or like , the idea in the sentence, "I love you so much that it hurts." So for me, it gives an air of sadness. But in the midst of it is someone deeply in love who's willing to hold on no matter what.
Very nice piece.
-- My dream is to see a woman cry.... ...because I made her too happy.
I think you have an impressive grasp of what I wanted to say through this poem my friend!
But let me add a thought to yours here for a second~
"You search for love but it destroys you in return." - Quite true, but the difference between "love" and true love is that the latter, when you're blessed with finding it, destroys you completely and builds you anew, better than before in care of she who you now belong to.
That, my friend, is true love.
--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
Thanks for your awesome words as always my dear; you make my life 1% better every day
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
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Kazashita te hiraite ano taiyou ni yararesousa Yuutsu na omoi wa sora ni tokashite ikou Atsui jaketto nugisute hashiri dashitanda dakara 6, 7, 8 Nai kaze fukasete ima tobi dashite GO!
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But let me add a thought to yours here for a second~
"You search for love but it destroys you in return." - Quite true, but the difference between "love" and true love is that the latter, when you're blessed with finding it, destroys you completely and builds you anew, better than before in care of she who you now belong to.
That, my friend, is true love.
--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre