Comment on Abortion by Davenit

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the lights are out, the camera laid
the model's there, unmov-ed, staid
now left, now right, and she complies
the scene's so bright no shadow lies

the message strong, found deep inside
the content dark, still cannot hide
an egg, a fork, syringe and mind
these ethereal photos find

the thoughts of viewers near and far
engaged on objects from a bar
a mannequin, a junkie's stash
the perfect shine of polished glass

today i stumbled on your art
not hard to find, front page d-art
i viewed your images apart
and felt some hope for today's art

haha...sorry for the crappy rhyming (esp in the last stanza). i haven't written poetry in a while, but i came across your gallery, saw the care that goes into each piece, and felt inspired to try. keep up the awesomeness! :D