hahaha so random, but funny. Great job. Love it!

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Desire and force between them are responsible for all our actions; desire causes our voluntary acts, force our involuntary. -Blaise Pascal

Pretty good, but the cut away went on for WAY too long and try to stay away from the "LOL SO RANDUMB" humor.

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"Esther Williams would piss her cotton panel at the sight of those rocket splits!"

But that's the shtick!

And this was was written by me. already wrote and recorded the second episode, so the crazy factor is 100X this one!

You probably didn't want to hear that.

dude, that was awesome. MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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"If the world sucks, I can always look away." ~"Tabibito Beginner" by Snowkel

Thanks!

>_<

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"Esther Williams would piss her cotton panel at the sight of those rocket splits!"

Alriiiiiiiight.......

My only peeve seems to be jerky movement. In some scenes it works, in others not so much. Characters kind of bounce just a little too high at times-- especially in the beginning.

But it was very good. You've really got a great formula for a series and I wouldn't have guessed you had never taken a class on flash. Really love The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe oral report. Stark Lyon Menendez. Certainly not unlike something I would do in high school (if I had ever gone, that is ). I'm liking the humor and the characters are very whimsical (it's a good thing).

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to write RurikoxTree fanfiction.

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"Television is an invention that permits you to be entertained in your living room by people you wouldn't have in your home."
- David Frost

Jesus is my Savior! <3

Right! So fix the beginning! ^_^

Yeah.. Sorry..

I'm willing to fix the animation and sounds and stuff... But the writing is the the way it's always been.

Thanks!

No more until I can get it to look good, sorry.